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Please suggest me how to represt the below letter.Why and Were are grammar mistakes?


I had 6cat,s .Now near my house a dog made his shelter.Even close to houses there are dogs.Therefore my mother gave the 3 kittens to a pet lover.The mother cat is crying for 3 days(loud sound of mau mau).Even my mother have great wish to see the kittens.IF my mother went to see the kitten,s , will it became difficult for kitten,s to forget my mother?What can I do shall I advise my mother to go to look the kitten,s..I am confused..The elder cat everyday bring,s dead bird,s for her kitten.As the cat,s kitten,s are not there in front her eye,s ,the elder cat look,s sad energy less . The pet lover had lost my one kitten 4days back? Is there any way to find the kitten.?Please suggest me what can i do?Which grammar is necessary ?

Asked by mini on 05:52, 20/08/2008 - 60 views
Learn English , using English      Tags: Beginner Grammar Writing
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Hi Mini, I have corrected your letter, but it needs a title, eg What do you advise?
I used to have six cats. Now, near my house a dog has sheltered. Nn nearby houses ,there are dogs as well. So my mother decided to give away three kittens to a cat lover.The mother cat was meowing loudly for 3 days.Even my mother wished to see the kittens. However, if my mother went to see the kittens ,it would have become difficult for the kittens to forget my mother.
What can I do? Shall I advise my mother to go and see the kittens ?I am confused.Everyday the mother cat brings dead birds for her kittens to eat. As the cat's kittens are not there in front her eyes, the mother cat looks sad and listless.
Also, the cat lover lost one of my kittens four days ago. Is there any way to find that kitten.? Please suggest what I can do?
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