Victoria Tran
Please HELP me correct my short essay!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Haiphong, one of the biggest coastal provinces in Vietnam, has high potentials, which are created from a number of available advantages, in developing marine economy. Some of the most favourable conditions are strategic location, comprehensive infrastructure and available supporting sectors. The city has continuously been trying to make those potentials come reality.
First of all, the geographical location is the key factor that determines towards-sea focus of the city’s economy. Being the biggest gateway towards the East Sea of the North, Haiphong provides the life-sea-line moving cargos between the Northern suppliers and Southern market and international market. Besides, Haiphong is also one of three main points of economic triangle, including Hanoi, Haiphong and Quangninh, which facilitates the city to attract not only domestic but also foreign investors. A well situated location is really a big advantage in marine economic development of the city.
Moreover, Haiphong has almost full-kind of modes of transport, comprising an airport, railways, roads, waterways, and a number of seaports. To be more specific, Haiphong Port is one of the biggest seaports in Vietnam, stretching over 12 kilometers, along which there is a variety of ports of bulk cargo, heavy cargo and containers. The total loading and unloading capacity of these ports reached 18.5 million tons in 2013. Another considerable advantage is the local perennial maritime education, which is able to provide the city with high-skilled and qualified human resources annually. The convenient transport system and available intensive labours make the city an attractive destination for both domestic firms and international investors.
Last but not least, the marine sector of Haiphong can benefit from its logistics chain and relating industries. In particular, there are about 20 shipyards which are specialized in building, and repairing ships with the State-of-the-Art techniques. Additionally, industrial zones such as VSIP, Trang Due, Do Son, etc. have enormous demands of transporting goods and material by ship, creating a busy employment market to develop marine economy.
All the advantages mentioned above enable Haiphong to accelerate its sea-focus orientated economy so that the city will become even wealthier, being a significant contributor to the whole country’s development

Aug 31, 2015 2:05 PM
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The city has continuously been steadily converting these advantages into assets.

First of all, the geographical location is the key factor that facilitates the seaward focus of the city’s economy.

September 2, 2015
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Short essay ??? No, not short. It may take 30 minutes or more to correct the essay.

Perhaps you will get a better response if you post this in the Notebook section.

August 31, 2015
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Some of its biggest advantages are its strategic location, well developed infrastructure and easily accessible supporting industries.

September 1, 2015
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I'll do the first sentence:

Haiphong, one of the biggest coastal provinces in Vietnam, has high potentials, which are created from a number of available advantages, in developing marine economy.

Haiphong, one of the biggest coastal provinces in Vietnam, has high potentials, which are created from a number of available advantages, in due to its developing marine economy.

August 31, 2015

Alright, I see this is being corrected in Notebook. Stopping now.

September 2, 2015
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