The life needs full of challenges ,so be sure to have their own goal in life,to give your pressure will have power . Today is important day,because I reached my first aim,yeah ~
Thank you correct me mistakes , I 'll improved my English continue , is good meet you
The life needs full of challenges ,so be sure to have their own goal in life,to give your pressure will have power . Today is important day,because I reached my first aim,yeah ~
I would write it as:
Our lives are full of challenges, so we should make sure to have our own goals in life. We should not cave in to pressure and have willpower. Today is an important day for me, because I have reached my first aim. Yay!
Well, I tried my best to change this accordingly.
Yeah. I know
Today is a good day.
Because it's Friday.
You know black Friday?
Someday like double eleven.
Shopping shopping shopping~~