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Question for native speakers . . . If you are a native speaker, Please help me . . . Thanks :)

At this discussion,

I will start to ask native speakers to answer my questions . . . Like,

( Correcting my sentences, asking for the meaning, . . . . . . etc )

& I really hope to find the help,


P.S. ( Of course everyone who wants to ask native speakers about anything . . . very welcomed ),


P.S. ( I know there is a section for questions, but they allow here on Italki for just 2 questions, but I always needs more, & I can't pay for the premium account "Sorry",

So, after finishing my 2 questions per day . . . I will use this discussion )


Thanks alot :)

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If I were a native speaker . . . Would I write these sentences like this ?

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A lot of us don't know how is the real starvation looks like,
I meant by saying ( eating from garbage ) . . . 2 things :
1 - Reach the real starvation,
2 - & yes, there are alot of people around the world eat from garbage everyday,
& trust me they don't care at all about getting sick, they just care about staying alive,
So, maybe the missing thing which can solve our problem is to be in their shoes just for one time,
there are alot of Scientists & Researchers & Specialists around the world who can answer your question more perfect than my answer,
so as you said . . . Why the problem still exists?
Is the world really waiting for me to solve this problem ?

)

 

1 - Understand  real starvation.  (Use Periods, not commas, at the end of sentences.)

 

 

 2 - There are a lot of people around the world    who eat from garbage everyday,

and  they don't care at all about getting sick.   They just care about staying alive.

 

3 - Maybe the solution to our our problem is to be in their shoes just for one time.

4 - There are alot of Scientists,   Researchers,  and Specialists around the world who can answer

the questions  with   greater expertise than can I;   but why   does the problem still exists?

 Is the world really waiting for me to solve this problem?

 

   (I hope this helps)

Thanks so much Mr.Bruce :)

of course it helps alot . . .

If I were a native speaker . . . Would I write these sentences like this ?

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The answer is (NO), the world isn't waiting for me to solve this problem,
Do you know ( Why )?
because we didn't do all what we can do, ( I mean the people around the world )
because we didn't do all what we must do,
because we didn't do all what we already know that can solve the problem,
but actually the world needs me to solve the problem,
Why ?!!!
because as I told you before that if you want to solve any problem, you must know the parties of this problem,
& I am a part in this problem . . . & you are too . . . & everyone too,
So, for specific answer for your question :
I will collect the most qualified specialists around the world to give me the right solutions,
& I will supervise the implementation process of the solutions,
& With a maximum penalties for those who impedes the implementation process of the solutions . . . ( You already told me that I have all authorities, right? )

)

 

 

The answer is (NO), the world isn't waiting for me to solve this problem.

 

 Do you know why? Because    we have not done all we can do. 

 

 Because we didn't do all   that   we must do.

 

Because we did  not  do all that  we already know which will  solve the problem.

 

   Actually the world needs me to solve the problem;  Why?

 

   Because as I told you before that if you want to solve any problem, you must know the parties of this problem, and I am a part in this problem, and so are  you.

 

Everyone  is a part of this problem.  

 

 So, for specific answer for your question : I will collect the most qualified specialists around the world to give me the right solutions,  and I will supervise the implementation process of the solutions.

   Also,  with  maximum penalties for those who impede the implementation process of the solutions, I will proceed aggressively to eliminate starvation. 

 

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Please,

May I ask you to explain the all uses of ( Verb to be ) for me, with an example for every use ?

Thanks alot :)

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