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Better research with formula of Finding more people help and just ask them by How to create new technology.

When you all seeing in the sky you will the colours of sky and how to change it if you have more informatoins please share to me.

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Hello Hong:

 

  Your   sentences need some changes to communicate your thoughts clearly.

Writing shorter, simpler sentences will help you communicate your several  ideas.

 

#1  How to create new technology?

 

#2  Is there a formula for better research?

 

 #3  "If you have more information  please share with me."

 

   [Your remarks about changing the color of the sky   need some  changes,  because it is not clear that the color of the sky requires change.   Also,  your reference to   "help"  is uncertain.]

 

    

 

 

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