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Italien singers

Hi friends! i want to impart my favorite  Italien singers,it's Eros Ramazzotti, Adriano Celentano. What do you think  about it? 

p.s If i do mistakes, you will correct me))) 

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You wrote, "Hi friends! i  want to impart my favorite Italien singers,it's Eros Ramazzotti, Adriano Celentano. What do you think about it?
p.s If i do mistakes, you will correct me))) "

 

Here are some corrections: Hi friends! I want to impart my favorite Italian singers: Eros Ramazzotti & Adriano Celentano. What do you think of these singers?

 

"Impart" is technically correct, but most people would say "share" or "list", eg;

I want to list my favourite Italian singers.

I want to share my favourite Italian singers (with you).

 

Instead of "it's", which is singular possessive, you should use "they are" (plural), and because it's plural, should say "about them", not "about it".

 

 

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