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Once upon a time a young man was walking alone in a wild place with his horse, he stopped for awhile to rest and suddenly he saw ...

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...a flock of birds fly out of a nearby tree.  Something had obviously startled them, so he decided to investigate.  Getting up, he mounted his horse and slowly headed toward the tree.  The horse seemed reluctant to go in that direction, which only made the young man more curious.  Nudging his horse forward...

 

they gingerly approached the tree.  A cloud covered the sun for a moment, it was darker than a moment before and there was an eerie silence ...

 

He looked at the tree and was suddenly very frightened. He could not believe his eyes ...

He were standing windmills nearly and he thought it's a enemy and then fought them.

 

He froze.  His horse whinnied and tried to back out of the passageway. He felt a warm wind, like a breath, blowing onto his face. His eyes searched the darkness.  He could see nothing but...

he heard a soft voice, it was a woman voice shouted "come...come.." without thinking he followed the voice through the darkness until he saw the light and he started running faster,running after his curiosity suddenly he stopped, unbelievable and an amazing view took his attention then the soft voice...

Grew softer and softer until he couldn't hear it at all. A cold draft of air followed him, chilling him to the bone. He turned his horse around in the passage trying to find the entrance, but it had disappeared! In despair he...

 ... remembered that he had heard a tiny tinkling sound as the cold air overtook him.  His horse moved close to him and seemed to draw his attention to the ground.  The horse raised a foreleg to indicate something.  The object shown with a light of its own in the narrow passage.  He reached down to examine the eerie glow of the object.  As he reached down he ...

 

attempted to touch the object which receded towards infinity and his arm followed it, growing longer and longer until ...

... he fell off his horse. He felt as though gravity has just been multiplied by a million. After spending a moment on the ground with his eyes closed , totally disoriented , he opened them again. His horse seemed to tower tens of meters above him. Frightened , he crawled away backwards , until his back hit a ...

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