İlayda.
How can I write a letter of complaint?

Dear Mr. Brown,

The reason I am writing this complain letter is that I think the buildings security service is not sufficient enough.

First of all, elevators despite the constant care, I want to mention the almost intact. When I saw that measures still was in shock. Administrators are not related to this topic. Most people is safety is at stake.

I think you would be interested with this problem. I hope can show the necessary importance to your elevators.

Yours Faithfully.

İlayda ....

Mar 2, 2015 8:30 PM
Comments · 2
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In a good complaint letter, the first sentence should say what you want done.

I am sorry to say that your letter is hard to understand. I understand that the elevators are unsafe, but I don't understand what the problem is. If it is a problem that can be photographed, if I were you I would take a picture and enclose it in the letter.

March 2, 2015

Bir cok Grammer ve kelime hatasi var. Cogullarda yanlis kullanilmis.

The reason why I am writing this complain letter is, I think the security service of building is insufficient.   Burada sifat binanin guvenliginden bahsederken aidiyeti dogru kullanmak gerekir.

 

July 29, 2015