Hello,everyone.It's my first time to try writing English poems and I deeply think it so interesting and challenging.Here are two poems I write about "true love" in my eyes.And i use rhetorical devices to regard "love" as "pepper" and "purple".Ahaha,maybe it looks a bit foolish and not so proper. But i still reckon the creating process also inspires me a lot and gives me more passion on English learning.
No.1
If love were a pepper
In my eye
At the first sight
Fiery as the gorgeous sun
Attracting the one seeks love
If love were a pepper
Tasting it in person
Hot and painful
Stimulating the entire nerves
If love were a pepper
If you have courage and patience
Going through the whole process
Till everything back to peace
Still stir in your heart
No.2
If love were purple
Simple and complicated
Making us twists and turns
But still want to get the scoop
If love were purple
As we all know
It consists of red,blue and white
In my eye
Passionate as red
Sorrowful as blue
Pure as white
If love were purple
It would draw a mysterious castle
Bring you endless romantic pleasure
Yet along with perpetual sorrow
But make a person cannot help
I dont know the format of English poem. Did you use it as chinese poem?
I think sometime I fall into the format of english poem occasionally
They said that is it but I still dont understand what is it