You speak with a Russian accent, but your accent is relatively mild.  You have mastered the English "r", which is a great victory.  The only word you pronounced completely wrong is "laugh".  You can listen to how "laugh" is pronounced here:   http://www.thefreedictionary.com/laugh    Just click on the icon of the "speaker", or on the icons of the American and British flag.   While you're on the dictionary's website, look for the words "party", "beauty", and "picnic", and listen to how they are pronounced.  

I think that you did very well. I was able to understand everything you said quite clearly. Good job.

Overall, not bad, and quite understandable. Here are what I believe are the problems the recording had in order of importance.

1) low quality recording

2) minor grammar mistakes

3) there was something wrong with the pronunciation of most words, but some words had bigger problems than others: arrived, curious, holiday, party, families, laugh?, like