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TRANSLATION:

Creativity, enthusiasm and imagination are essential qualities for every business initiative. But when someone start a business the risks are lurking. The essential instrument to make it big is the “business plan”, a planning document essential to determine purposes and strategies and to highlight potential risks.
WHAT THE BUSINESS PLAN IS?
The business plan is a detailed proposal that examines all activity areas of a company. It is just like a business identity card, in which all business program’s components are written: the trade analysis, the financial project, marketing and human resource management. More detailed it is, easier the relation between new entrepreneur and lending institution became. But its function is not only a company business card to achieve public or private loan. A good “business plan” help to understand the problems which the company have to deal with and the vehicle available to do it.

 

SENTENCES

1. When the shares price grow, it could be the right moment to sell.
2. A fourteen-year-old boy was blamed of had broken school windows.
3. I was worried about students lack of interest.
4. What make me angry is not how he speaks but what he says.
5. In May, under the linden’s shadow, people can walk in the cooler, like in a room.
6. Is almost 30 years that the Bophal disaster victims have asked for justice.
7. More we praise our merit, more other people don’t believe in it.
8. It was a really long waiting time between the 10.30 train for Milan and the next?
9. The tourist guide explain us where to left our stuff.
10. Orvieto is the perfect destination not only for people who are interested in archeology but also for whom who love art in general.

Jul 30, 2015 7:15 AM