It was in my junior middle school when i just began to speak in public,i noded and bowed to the audience,my head hit right on the microphone,everyone was laughing,at the end of the speech,my head hit

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It was in my junior middle school when i just began to speak in public,i noded and bowed to the audience,my head hit right on the microphone,everyone was laughing,at the end of the speech,my head hit the microphone again when i bowed to them to say goodbye.they laughed more loudly than before.

Apr 30, 2024 6:26 AM

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It was in my junior high school when I just began to speak in public. When I noded and bowed to the audience, my head hit right on the microphone. Everyone was laughing at me. At the end of the speech, my head hit the microphone again when i bowed to them to say goodbye. They laughed more loudly than before.

When we refer to the school after elementary school, we can say "middle school" or "junior high school". Thank you for sharing your story! It must have been embarrassing for you then, but I hope you're able to laugh about it now! :)

Apr 30, 2024 7:06 AM

It was in my junior middle school when i just began to speak in public. I nodded and bowed to the audience. My head hit right on the microphone. Everyone was laughing. At the end of the speech,my head hit the microphone again when i bowed to them to say goodbye. They laughed more loudly than before.

If thee is a completely different thought or phrase, make a new sentence. Don't try to just connect them all with commas. Good job.

May 1, 2024 7:14 AM

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