I had only 2 lessons of Spanish, here I write a very simple self introduction, i do hope some friends can give me good suggestions:
Soy china, me llamo Liliana, soy vendedora.
What you wrote is OK, but it is better to use "y" instead comma before to the last item of a list of items (it is quite similar to English, actually)
Soy china, me llamo Liliana y soy vendedora.
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