trying to formulate new sentences...
- I was at home just chilling, when a friend of me came out of the blue at my door.
- My wife was at college and before ending her class, she called asking me to pick up her, so I told her, Hey dear! No problem, I'm on my way!
So, that's it! Thank you very much guys!
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trying to formulate new sentences...
Hello Italki friends! What's up? Well, I'm here, trying to formulate new sentences...
- I was at home just chilling out, when a friend of me came out of the blue, ringing 1 at my door.
- My wife was at college and before ending her class ended, she called asking me to pick up her. so I told her, "Hey dear! No problem dear!, I'm on my way!"
So, that's it! Thank you very much guys!
1. You need some sort of description here. You can use other words such as, "standing", "banging", "knocking", "crying" etc.
Since you are writing to practise your colloquial speech, I am not correcting your piece as formal writing. You also need to learn about how a comma is being used. You have it all at the wrong places.
trying to formulate new sentences...
Hello Italki friends! What's up? (In the UK this means 'What's wrong') Well, I'm here, trying to formulate new sentences...
- I was at home just chilling, when a friend of mine came out of the blue at to my door.
- My wife was at college and before ending her class, she called asking me to pick her up her, so I told her, "Hey dear! No problem, I'm on my way!"
....so I said, "Sure, no problem; I'm on my way."
So, that's it! Thank you very much guys!
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