You are here!人生何处不相逢
Eight years past many things changed, I worked for many years, I got married and have a lovely son.Ithought and thought, finally I remember his name.It touched me and make me remember many things happened before and many people who I know.
You are here when I meet you!
Where are you when I think of you.
I hope all the people who I knew is happy,happy and happier.
Bye, my memory;Bye,the young me!
I will love and treasure each day of my life to make no regeret for future.
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You are here!人生何处不相逢
Last Sunday, I brought my son to take part in an activity for children. I saw a man who looked like my former "boyfriend" , but I was not sure enough, so I didn't say hello to him. I even forgot his name. That man brought his daughter to this activity too. I thought that maybe I was mistaken because I hadn't seen my friend for about 8 years. I could not tell if he looked like him or not. I don't know. I didn't want to ask him because, first, my son ran everywhere; secondly, I really didn't know what to say if he really was that man! I remembered the old things when I was so young and so proud of myself when we knew each other. We didn't get along with each other for long time because I wanted to focus on myself being a postgraduate at that time, and my parents didn't agree with me to choosing a boyfriend like him.
Eight years passed, and many things changed. I worked for many years. I got married and had a lovely son. I thought and thought. Finally I remembered his name. It touched me and made me remember many things that happened before and remember many people that I know.
You are here when I meet you!
Where are you when I think of you?
I hope all the people who I knew are happy,happy and happier. [not a common phrase]
Bye, my memory. Bye,the young me!
I will love and treasure each day of my life and have no regrets in the future.
[很好的作文!Very agreement is very important. Many Americans get this wrong. When telling a story, if you use a past tense, all verbs must be past tense in relation to the story. I hope you have no regrets :)]
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