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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, well....here i post the same thing than i wrote in my description:

"I'm searching people to practice english (or if you want practice spanish with me, no problem). I try to learn with music, movies, chatting in some websites and playing videogames. I like the music (rock and metal, principally), books, comics, videogames and martial arts training."

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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    Hi! Well... [when using an ellipsis, ALWAYS use three dots. Sorry, it happens to be one of my pet peeves.] Here, I am posting the same thing that I wrote in my description. 

    I'm searching for people to practice English. And if you want to practice Spanish with me, then there is no problem. I try to learn with music, movies, chatting in some websites and playing videogames. [Alternatively, you can say: I try to learn by listening to music, watching movies, etc. There is much redundancy with this so I prefer your version. In brevity there is beauty!] I like music (mostly rock and metal), books, comics, videogames and martial arts.

    Please let me know if you find some errors...[Your original sentence was okay but this is how it is usually said.]

     
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    At any rate, your English is very good! Keep up the good work. It is okay to struggle with punctuation in written communication but I'll assure you, your piece would have conveyed the same message had it been read to me. There is a joke about punctuation and something that I might not be able to post here but that's for me to know and for you to find out. Peace!

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    Hi, well....here i post the same thing than i wrote in my description:

    "I'm searching people to practice english (or if you want practice spanish with me, no problem). I try to learn with music, movies, chatting in some websites and playing videogames. I like the music (rock and metal, principally), books, comics, videogames and martial arts training."

    If you detect some error, please tell me....
    Thanks for reading!

    This is very interesting!
     

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    Hi, well...here I am posting the same thing that I wrote in my description:

    "I'm searching for people with whom to practice English (or if you just want to practice Spanish with me, that's not a problem). I try to learn by listening to music, watching movies, chatting in various websites and playing videogames. I like music (rock and metal, principally), books, comics, videogames and martial arts training."

    If you detect some error, please tell me....
    Thanks for reading!

    Just a few minor corrections some of which have been made previously...overall, quite good, Eduardo.  Do you ever do intercambios via Skype?

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    Hi, well, here I'll post the same thing that I wrote in my description:

    "I'm searching for people to practice English with (or if you want to practice Spanish with me, no problem). I try to learn from [through] music, movies, chatting on websites and playing videogames. I like music (mostly [mainly, chiefly, primarily] rock and metal), books, comics, videogames and martial arts training."

    If you find an error, please tell me.
    Thanks for reading!

     

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    Hi, here I'll post the same thing that I wrote in my description:

     

    I'm looking for people to help me practice English (if you also want to practice Spanish with me, I can help you). I try to learn through music, movies, chatting on websites, and playing videogames. I like music, mainly rock and metal, books, comics, videogames, and training in martial arts. 

     

    If you find an error, please tell me.

    Thanks for reading! 

     

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