First notebook entry: Introducing myself

我是Gwilym, 我的中文名字是詹季威。我是從英國來的我来自英国，但是現在我住在馬公，台灣的马公。我學中文打鬼大概四個月，和我喜歡中文，應為因为它很難。我是二十四岁雖。以前一年前，我在愛丁堡學習神經科學.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

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我是Gwilym, 我的 If the context is understood, it is unnatural in Chinese to repeat pronouns 中文名字是詹季威。我是從 英國來的 coming from England does not mean you are of English descent or a citizen there, it just means you came from there. It is better to say 我是英國人. 但是現在我住在馬公，台灣 的馬公。The Chinese convention is the opposite way.  It reflects on the philosophy.  Society comes first before oneself unlike in the West, where individuality preceeds. 我學中文/已經/大慨/有打鬼四個月了，和我喜歡中文因應為很難學 You like to learn Chinese because it is difficult to learn or are you trying to say, "I love Chinese but it is difficult to learn"? If this is the case, then我喜歡中文但很難學 。我今年是二十四歲雖。以前一年 or 前一年我在愛丁堡念/讀學習神經科學. 學 = learn, 學習 = learn and practise the skill.  To study therefore is just only 學.  For example, if you are learning kungfu etc, 學習 is better because you need to practise what you learnt at the same time. You can't use it if you are studying things such as medicine or psychology because you aren't licensed to do so.  This are the subtle differences due to differences in culture and philosophy.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

我是Gwilym, 我的中文名字是詹季威。我是從英國來的但是現在我住在馬公，台灣。我學中文打鬼四個月，和我喜歡中文應為很難。我是二十四雖。以前一年我在愛丁堡學習神經科學.

我是Gwilym, 我的中文名字是詹季威。我是從英國來的但是現在我住在馬公，台灣。我學中文打鬼四個月，和我喜歡中文應為很難。我是二十四雖。以前一年我在愛丁堡學習神經科學.

我是Gwilym, 我的中文名字是詹季威。我來自英國，(但)現在我住在台灣的馬公市。我學中文約四個月，我喜歡中文，因為它很難學習。我(是)二十四歲。前一年我在愛丁堡學習神經科學。

If you live in Penghu county，台灣的馬公市>>>you also can write 台灣的澎湖縣馬公市

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

我是Gwilym, 我的中文名字是詹季威。我是從英國來的但是現在我住在<strike>馬公，台灣</strike>（台湾，马工）。我學中文<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>打鬼</strike>（大概）</font>四個月，<strike>和</strike>我喜歡中文，<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>應為</strike>（但是）</font>很難。我<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">是</font></strike>二十四雖。<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">以</font></strike>前一年我在愛丁堡學<font style="background-color: yellow;">（习</font><font style="background-color: yellow;">）</font>習神經科學.

 

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