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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm here for because I want to make friends from all around the world .
I want know on differents culture.
I would say nothing other for the moment...^^

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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I'm here because I want to make friends from all around the world.
    I want to know about different cultures.
    I will say nothing else for the moment...^^

    my correction is a little informal I guess:

     

    I'm here cause I wanna (want to) make friends from all aound the world.

    I wanna (want to) know (learn about) different cultures.

    I have nothing more to say for the moment! ("I would say nothing else" is a little strong and gives the impression that you are writing unwillingly)

     

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I'm here for because I want to make friends from all around the world .
    I want     know on differents culture.
    I would say nothing other for the moment...^

    for because = because

    want    know on  = want to know about / learn about

    differents cultur =  different cultures ( plural  s  is added to the noun and not the adjective )

    other = else

     

    wish u luck

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I'm here because I want to make friends from all around the world .
    I want know about different cultures.
    I would say nothing else for the moment...^^

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I'm here for because I want to make friends from all around the world.
    I want know more on different cultures.
    I can say nothing else for the moment...^^

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