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Hello friends ,
Gladly to meet you here~ I will introduce myself briefly now.
I am engaged in international business trade, my job need talking oral english with the foreign customer fluently.In view to this situation, I hope to make friends and establish our long friendship from now on .I live in Qingdao of China which is a pleasure &famous place, ,looking forward your coming . Pls feel free to contact with me.
I am engaged in international trade, my job requires me to fluently talking oral english with foreign customers fluently, I hope to make friends here, also and get familiar with each other to establish a long friendship. I live in Qingdao in China now, for you severse as a good guider on a trip. It is Pleasure to feel freedom to contact with me.
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 - This is not a common greeting. It is certainly understandable, but not natural.
 - Talking and oral mean the same thing - so it doesn't make sense to use both.
 - This is one way to say the sentence naturally. There are many others.
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