A Wonderful Time
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A Wonderful Time
Tom and his girlfriend had a wonderful time last night. First, he took her to a restaurant for dinner. Then, they go went to a concert. Finally, they had a coffee at a nearby cafe. Just before they parted, she gave him a good-night kiss. At that moment, tom was feeling like he was on the top of the world.
Tom loves his girlfriend very much. Whenever she watches a sad movie, she cries will cry and at that moment, tom always holds her tight against his chest with arms encircling her. when she is crying in his arms. His girlfriend charms him with her good temper.
Later, Before a year, Tom went/had gone to Beijing to pursue further his studies further in maths. He lived there for one year. At first, he was happy, but later latter, he was frustrated and depressed. He was homesick all the time. Although the people there were friendly, he still missed his family, his friends and the lifestyle in his hometown.
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