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The Most Beautiful Things In Your Feeling

 

All the people around you agree with you.

Smile to wake up from the dream.

Look at each other with a beautiful stranger in the street.

The right things are on sale.

Hear your favorite song by chance.

Find a hundred yuan in the coat you wore last winter.

Hear someone praise you by chance.

Find that there are still several hours left to sleep when you wake up.

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    This is indeed a fortuitous example in misunderstanding that your independent sentences was corrected and written like a poem.  I shall post this in 詩人的魂 as a discussion and see how to write good English in different circumstances.  Thanks.

    As you can see both corrections are totally different.

     

     

    These are some independent sentences.


    你感觉最美的事情

    The Most Beautiful Things In Your Feeling

    Things you felt are the most beautiful.

    The most beautiful things in your mind.


    1. 所有的人都觉得你说的对。
    All the people around you agree with you.
    All people felt what you said was correct.

    Everyone thinks what you said was correct.

     

    2. 从梦中笑醒。

    Smile to wake up from the dream.  這有美夢發後, 醒時滿臉笑容 的含意

    From dream inside smiling upon wakening.

    Awakened by smiles in your dream.
     
    3.
    和一个漂亮的路人对视

    Look at each other with a beautiful stranger in the street.

    With a pretty looking pedestrian looking at each other.

    Exchanging glances with a good-looking passerby on the street.

    Exchanging glances with a good-looking pedestrian.


    4.发现心仪的东西半价出售。
    The right things are on sale.

    Discovering your favourite things at half price sale.

    Discovering your favourites on sale at half price.

     

    5. 偶然听到最喜欢的歌。
    Hear your favorite song by chance.

    Accidentally/”By chance” you hear your favourite song.

    Fortuitously, your favourite song was heard.

     

    6.在去年冬天的外套里找到100元钱。

    Find a hundred yuan in the coat you wore last winter.
    In last winter’s coat you found 100 yuan.

    Finding a hundred yuan note in the coat you wore last winter. I like your version better with English grammar fixed.


    7.偶然听到别人夸自己。
    Hear someone praise you by chance.

    By chance, you heard someone praising you.


    8.醒来发现还能睡几个小时。

    Find that there are still several hours left to sleep when you wake up.

    Upon wakening, you found that you can sleep for a few hours more.

    The Most Beautiful Things In Your Feeling Your Most Beautiful Feelings

     

    When All the surrounding people around youagree with nod their heads at you.

    Smile Or similing as you to wake up from the a dream. 

    Have a look at each other with a that beautiful stranger in on the street.

    The right things How about things you wanted are on sale?

    Perchance, you hear your favorite song by chance.

    And find a hundred yuan note in the coat you wore last winter. 

    On hearing someone a praise for you? by chance.

    Find that Or to find there are that there are still several more sleeping hours remain left to sleep when you wake got up.

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