My first long translation...

For class I had to try translating the attached article from Thai into English. With a lot of help from my dictionary the attached Google Doc is what I came up with. How did I do?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Wcf9AbasgPrTs6iZcBoqaGdEyiiTb_AHoTZnPYHr4WM/edit

Please point out where I missed or changed too much to make the story make sense.

Thanks!