First entry: Gioi Thieu Toi

First entry: Gioi Thieu về Toi

Chao Ban
Toi ten la Josh. Anh 28 tuoi va song o Canada.
Cong viec cua anh là cham soc suc khoe.

Anh muon hoc tieng viet de hieu gia dinh ban gai cua toi. Gia dinh ban gai của tôi que o Quang Ninh nhung da song o canada 20 nam.

Good luck!

First entry: Gioi Thieu ve Toi

Chao Ban
Toi ten la Josh.  Toi 28 tuoi va song o Canada. 
Cong viec cua  toi cham soc suc khoe. 

 Toi  muon hoc tieng viet de hieu  ve gia dinh ban gai cua toi. Gia dinh ban gai  toi que o Quang Ninh nhung da song o canada 20 nam.

"Anh" is a pronoun, it is used when two people talk face to face, and you talk to someone who is younger than you.

First entry: Gioi Thieu Toi

Chao Ban
Toi ten la Josh. Anh Toi 28 tuoi va song o Canada.
Cong viec cua anh la cham soc suc khoe.

Anh muon hoc tieng Viet de hieu gia dinh ban gai cua toi. Gia dinh ban gai que o Quang Ninh nhung da song o canada 20 nam.

Your Vietnamese is good! Good luck!