First notebook entry: Introducing myself

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm studying English for my job, and I want to travelling around the world when I retired.

If you see me online don't hesitate to call me, if I am free I will chat with you.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm study english for my job and I want travelling around the world if i get retired.If you see me online don't hestitage to call me, if I free I will chat with you.

I'm studying English for my job. When I retire, I plan on traveling around the world. If you see me online, don't hesitate to contact me with free services.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm study english for my job and I want travelling around the world if i get retired.If you see me online don't hestitage to call me, if I free I will chat with you.

I'm studying English for my job and I want to travel around the world after retiring. When you find me online, don't hesitate to message me. If free I will chat with you.

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