Perry
My Dream How time flies!I have become a big girl,which is not as good as I expected. And my dream became smaller and smaller,either. When I was young, I looked forward to becoming a scientist.But I give it up in my twelve.At that time I was attracted by the music bond TVXQ which came from Korea, so I started to improve my singing skill and I want to be a famous singer to perform with my idols on the stage. 5 years later I interested in cartoon in Japan, I immediately dreamed of being a artist. I learned Japanese on the internet in my spare time,so I only knew a little about Japanese. Now, I want to follow my mind, doing something helpful.I’ve ever seen a sentence that "Do waht you want,and you never regret." My real dream is to go ahead all of my dream!
Jun 21, 2012 2:59 PM
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My Dream

How time flies!I have become a big girl now, which is not as good as I expected. But unlickly my dreams became smaller and smaller,
When I was young, I looked forward to be a Scientist. But I gave it up when i was  twelve. At that time I was attracted by the music band TVXQ which came from Korea, so I started to improve my singing skills and I wanted to be a famous singer to perform with my idols on the stage. 5 years later I got interested in cartoon in Japan,  Immediately I started  dreaming of being an artist. I learned Japanese on the internet in my spare time. So I only knew a little about Japanese.
Now, I want to follow my mind or brain, I want to do something helpful. I’ve ever seen a sentence state "Do what you want and you never regret."
My real dream is to go ahead of all my dreams!

 

A very sweet Aim indeed. and even nice decision to follow your mind. Keep it up. You are a good person.I have pointed out few mistakes plz watch them careully.

June 21, 2012
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