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mainne ek kahaanii padhi!

(note: for me as a german native it's more understandable to write double-i instead of double-e, as english natives would do)

kal ko aur aaj mainne ek bahut dilcasp hindi kahaanii padhii. is kahaanii kii baat ek nanhiin hathnii ke baare men thii! mainne bahut-se naye shabd ko jaannaa paya. mere lie aisa abhyaas bilkul mahatvapurna tha. is tarah se meri hindi behtar jaa rahi hai!

dusre haathiyon ko Roza (hathnii ka naam) nahin jaantii.. hathnii itni akelapaan se akhartii thii, ki usne apne chidiyaaghar ko chhod kiya aur shahar ke paar gaudne shuruu kiya! Roza ne ek aaiskrim vale ko aur ek naariyal bechne vale ko daraa rahii thii! usne aur bhi ek traifik jaam karvaa diya tha..
kab ant men Roza ko lakde men bhejte hain, tab Roza ko bharii khushii huii! ab tak darshak use sirf lakde men dusre haathiyon ke saath khelte hue dekh rahe hain!

hathnii kii svatantrataa shuruu hota hai! :)

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    mainne ek kahaanii padhi!

    (note: for me as a german native it's more understandable to write double-i instead of double-e, as english natives would do)

    kal ko aur aaj mainne ek bahut dilcasp dilchasp hindi kahaanii padhii. is kahaanii kii baat ek nanhiin hathnii ke baare mein thii! mainne bahut-se naye shabd shabdon ko jaan paya(or maine bahut se naye shabd jaanein). mere lie aisa abhyaas bilkul mahatvapurna tha. is tarah se meri hindi behtar hoti jaa rahi hai(or behtar ho rahi hai) !

    dusre haathiyon ko Roza (hathnii ka naam) nahin jaantii.. hathnii itni akelapaan se akhartii thii(hathni ko akelapan itna akharta tha), ki usne apne chidiyaaghar ko chhod kiya aur shahar ke paar gaudne(?) shuruu kiya! Roza ne ek aaiskrim vale ko aur ek naariyal bechne vale ko daraa rahii thii! usne aur bhi ek traifik jaam bhi karvaa diya tha..
    kab jab ant mein Roza ko lakde mein bhejte hain, tab Roza ko bharii khushii huii! ab tak darshak use sirf lakde men dusre haathiyon ke saath khelte hue dekh rahe hain!

    hathnii kii svatantrataa shuruu hota hoti hai! :)

    mainne ek kahaanii padhi!

    (note: for me as a german native it's more understandable to write double-i instead of double-e, as english natives would do)

    kal ko aur aaj mainne ek bahut dilchasp Hindi kahaanii padhii. is kahaanii kii baat ek nanhii hathnii ke baare men thii! mainne bahut-se naye shabd ko jaannaa paya. mere lie aisa abhyaas bilkul mahatvapurna tha. is tarah se meri hindi behtar hoti jaa rahi hai!

    dusre haathiyon ko Roza (hathnii ka naam) nahin jaantii.. hathnii itni akelapaan se akhartii thii, ki usne apne chidiyaaghar ko chhod diya aur shahar ke paar daurna shuruu kiya! Roza ne ek aaiskrim(ice cream) vale ko aur ek naariyal bechne vale ko daraa rahii thii! usne aur bhi ek traifik jaam karvaa diya tha..
    jab ant men Roza ko lakde men bhejte hain, tab Roza ko bharii khushii huii! ab tak darshak use sirf lakde men dusre haathiyon ke saath khelte hue dekh rahe hain!

    hathnii kii svatantrataa shuruu hota hai! :)

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