First notebook entry: Introducing myself

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English, because I want to travel abroad one day, but the most important reason is I have to pass my English examination. My native language is Chinese, and I grew up in Yining, a beautiful small city in the north of China. I enjoy painting and I like playing badminton.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English ,because I want to travel abroad one day ,but the most important reason is I have to pass my English examination.My native language is Chinese ,and I grew up in Yining,a beautiful small city in the north of China.I enjoy painting .I like  to play badminton.