Farsi - find a mistake !

Farsi - find a mistake !

I would not be surprised if these two sentences have several issues:

1- During my travels am experiencing many countries
در طولِ سَفَرَم از کِشوَرهای زیادی دیدن می کنم و تجربه های زیادی به دست می آورم

or

در طولِ سَفَرَم تَجرُبه دیدن کشورهای زیادی را خواهم داشت.

or

در طولِ سَفَرَم تَجرُبه دیدن کشورهای زیادی را بِدَست می آوَرَم. (this is using simple present tense to express about future- this one is much near to what you want to say. )

2- My uncle is coming to my birthday party and is bringing a present

عمویم دارد به جشن تولدم مى آيد و دارد (برایم ) هديه ى مى آورد. (Better to say  for whom  is he going to bring the present)

I am using the present continuous form here on purpose, for the sake of practicing it.

please look at some more exampls:

من دارم به گل ها آب می دَهَم.

ما داریم کار می کنیم.

آنها الان با هم صحبت می کنند.

بچه ها دارند در حیاط بازی می کنند.

Ok my friend, great job. I enjoyed this notebook entry. I think you are studying on your own, so I should say congratulatiojns. You have some problems in conjugations but you will reduce the problems by practice; practice makes perfect.

Feel free to ask me for help at any time.

Yours

Hiva

Farsi - find a mistake !

I would not be surprised if these two sentences have several issues:

در طور سفرم دارم از كشور زيادى تجرنه مى منم

During my travels am experiencing many countries
عموام دارد به جشن تولدم مى آيد و دارد هديه ى مى آورد
My uncle is coming to my birthday party and is bringing a present

I am using the present continuous form here on purpose, for the sake of practicing it

Farsi - find a mistake !

I would not be surprised if these two sentences have several issues:

دارم از كشور زيادى تجربه مى كنم در طول سفرم
During my travels I am experiencing many countries
عموام دارد به جشن تولدم مى آيد و دارد هديه ى مى آورد
My uncle is coming to my birthday party and is bringing a present

I am using the present continuous form here on purpose, for the sake of practicing it