金黄突额隆头鱼 Aug 24, 2010 在海岸中，在"花鰭海豬魚"的群里，有一条年幼的"金黄突额隆头鱼"。它的特点是红色的身体和身体上有从眼睛到尾鳍一条线。当它成长的时候，这线逐渐消失和它的头隆起。 Semicossyphus reticulatus There was one juvenile Asian Sheepshead Wrasse among a lot of Malticolor

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金黄突额隆头鱼 Aug 24, 2010 在海岸中，在"花鰭海豬魚"的群里，有一条年幼的"金黄突额隆头鱼"。它的特点是红色的身体和身体上有从眼睛到尾鳍一条线。当它成长的时候，这线逐渐消失和它的头隆起。 Semicossyphus reticulatus There was one juvenile Asian Sheepshead Wrasse among a lot of Malticolorfin Rainbowfish　at the rocky shore. The features of the fish are the red body and one line from the eye to the tail fin. As it develops into adult, the line vanishes and the heat grows up into a lump.

Aug 24, 2010 7:06 AM

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Semicossyphus reticulatus

There was one juvenile Asian Sheepshead Wrasse among a lot of Malticolorfin Rainbowfish　at the rocky shore. The features of the fish are the red body and have one line from the eye to the tail fin. As it develops into adult, the line vanishes and its head <strike>grows up into a lump.</strike> protrudes.

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August 24, 2010

金黄突额隆头鱼 Aug 24, 2010

在（布满岩石的）海岸<strike>中</strike>边，在"花鰭海猪鱼"的群里，有一条<strike>年幼</strike>幼年的"金黄突额隆头鱼"。它的特点是红色的身体和（身体上有）一条从眼睛到尾鳍的线。当它<strike>成长</strike>长成的时候，这线会逐渐消失，<strike>和</strike>并且它的头（部）会隆起。

ピンクの文を書くほうかいいと思います。それから、書き言葉と科学文だたら、“<a name="OLE_LINK24">年幼</a>”より“幼<a name="OLE_LINK25">年</a>”のほうか多く使います。“成长”は過程を表す動詞です。<a name="OLE_LINK29"></a><a name="OLE_LINK28">“</a><a name="OLE_LINK27"></a><a name="OLE_LINK26">长成</a>”はあの過程の結果を表す動詞です 。ここで　“长成”を使うほうかいいと思います。<o:p></o:p>