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I will be go in goa last nevember'2011 in my group, = I will be going to Goa in next November 2011.
my train is 4.30 pm in surat and i will be rech (REACHING) in Goa next day early MORNING @ 6.30
, i will be rech ( REACHING ) my hotel @ 7.30 am,
i will BE ( GET ) fresh IN my hotel than ( THEN ) i will be go (GOING) in ( TO) baga beach,
it is ( AN ) ameging ( AMEZING ) beach,
( SEA ) sea's water are ( IS ) very clean and clear
i will dive in this water i will be enjoy ( ENJOYING ) hole day,
i will enjoy by 4 type OF (RIDES ) ride, baloon ride is very intresting i will pay 600 rs ( RS 600 ) in ( FOR ) his ( THIS ) ride,
I will seat ( SIT ) in A Boat than ( THEN ) boat ( WILL ) go to the sea i think boat stop in beach to 30 to 40 km in sea than one by one all men ware (WERE ) in baloon than ( THEN ) baloon go (GOES) in the boat ( AIR ) to over the ( UP IN THE SKY ) 130 to 150 fit over ( IN ) the skthis time beach view is the amezing,2 nd day i will be visit in N orth G oa, i will sean ( SEE ) THE CHURCH Charch, Dolfine Show, Fort, Coconet Beach, Jail,and othe ( OTHER ) beaches,3rd night i will go in disco track & crouse ( CRUISE ) & casino Visit, My experience in Goa Your Hole life one time plz visit to ( IT WILL BE MY LIFE TIME EXPERIENCE ) Goa
Actually you should have written in the Past tense. OK ?
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