Two english essays need to be corrected,Please
NO.1
Thing description
It”s very common in our study life. We use it everyday,especially for those foreign language. Actually it”s portable. I have one too,it”s totally silvery white on the surface. You will find 39 black keys and 13 white keys, and also a screen ,but it doesn”t bright in the evening. Differing from the old one , the new product has more fuctions than before, more vocubulary ,mixed languages ,tests about the language you learn and even culture information about the country. What”s more ,games,music ,flash are sometimes allowed for such of product. Everyone know it -----electronic dictionary.
NO.2
Olympic spirits and me
As a international sports event, the Olympic games have presented many things: mutual understaning , friendship, unity and fair compitition and so on. Maybe you will say”I just wannabeat him, win the gold medal and bonus. But these debase the value of the games. That`s to say, there still are something valueable beyond the gold medal. We can make friends with our adversaries , meet people all arund the world.
To me ,there is nothing more improtant than the spirits of the Olympic games. You can learn much from the athletes, for they`re confident, brave and patriotic. You can learn from the spirit of the athletes who never give up trying, such as Lina, who has won the champingship two days ago.
So we should try our best to turn these spirits into action, not just keep them in mind.
Thing description
It”s very common in our study life. We use it everyday,especially for those foreign language. Actually it”s portable. I have one too,it”s totally silvery white on the surface. You will find 39 black keys and 13 white keys, and also a screen ,but it doesn”t bright in the evening. Differing from the old one , the new product has more fuctions than before, more vocubulary ,mixed languages ,tests about the language you learn and even culture information about the country. What”s more ,games,music ,flash are sometimes allowed for such of product. Everyone know it -----electronic dictionary.
NO.2
Olympic spirits and me
As a international sports event, the Olympic games have presented many things: mutual understaning , friendship, unity and fair compitition and so on. Maybe you will say”I just wannabeat him, win the gold medal and bonus. But these debase the value of the games. That`s to say, there still are something valueable beyond the gold medal. We can make friends with our adversaries , meet people all arund the world.
To me ,there is nothing more improtant than the spirits of the Olympic games. You can learn much from the athletes, for they`re confident, brave and patriotic. You can learn from the spirit of the athletes who never give up trying, such as Lina, who has won the champingship two days ago.
So we should try our best to turn these spirits into action, not just keep them in mind.
Share:
Corrections
No corrections have been written yet. Please write a correction!
Write a correction
Please enter between 25 and 8000 characters.
2 comments
Please enter between 0 and 2000 characters.