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i made some eid cakes =)) it's so delicious

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Hiba Hatem
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Happy Eid ^^

I have (1) made some Eid cakes =)) They are so delicious.

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1. I believe you've wanted to draw our attention to the result, but not to the process of baking. In that case, that would be better to use Present Perfect tense.

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