Description(1)- plz correct my note

Description(1)- plz correct my note

The sun is high up in the sky and it's almost 8 o'clock. But Bob is still sleeping. He seems to be having in a nice dream. 
Because it is ing at 8, the clock is ringing noisily. He has just awakened to the sound of the clock ringing, but he doesn't want to wake up now.   to see hHe is coversing his ears with his hands. 
Finally, his mom comes into his room. The hands of the clock already point to already 8:20. 
"Bob, Ttime to get up. It's 8:20" 
Until then, hHe keeps his hands over is covering his ears.
"Okay, I don't care whether you are late for your work or not." And she goes out of his room. 
By then, he wakes up and stretches himself with a yawn, saying, something out. “What did y she say said….. Huh?! Oh my! It’s 8:20!” 
His eyes pop are coming out of his head with watching the clock. 
‘What should I do first? I have to hurry.’
He is jumpsing out of his bed and runs to the a bathroom to take a shower. He looks very nervous. 

The phrase "I don't care whether _(whatever happens)__ or not" is usually how that kind of statement is said.  

Saying someone's "eyes popped out of their head" is also a very recognizable coloquialism.  

Depending on the rest of the story, "nervous" might very well be a good word.  Another word that might work is "anxious".  We'll have to wait and see what he is nervous about :)

Description(1)- plz correct my note

The sun is high up in the sky and it's it is almost 8 o'clock. But Bobby is still sleeping. He seems to be in a nice dream.

Being At 8am, the clock is ringing beeped/rang/clanged noisily. He has just awakened to the sound of clock ringing but he Bobby doesn't did not want to wake up.  now to See how he is covering his ears with his hands.

Finally, his mom comes came in his room. The hands of the clock point were already pointing at 8:20am.

 
"Bobby, time to get up. It's 8:20!"

Until then, he is was still covering his ears with his hands.

"Okay! I don't care whether if you are late for your work." And she goes went out his room. By then, he wakes up and Finally, he stretched himself with a and yawned something out.

“Why What'd she say? id….. Huh! Oh my!  It’s 8:20!”

His eyes are coming popped out of his head with watching as he glanced at the clock.

"What should I do first? I have to/better hurry."

He is jumping jumped out of his bed and ran to a the bathroom to take a shower. He lookeds very antsy nervous. Nervous is too strong a word here.

Bobby is for a kid.  Bob is for a grown up man.  I changed it to Bobby because

1.  To any mother, her children are still kids.

2.  This is to surprise the reader.  We think you are writing about a kid because he still acts like one, only later to find that he's not a kid any more.  This makes a good story.