A Trip to Hawaii
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A Trip to Hawaii
I went on a trip to Hawaii last week. I stayed at a condo for 5 nights and had a lot of experience.. experienced many things, such as: Sailing, Boogieboard, Paddleboard, Snorkel, and Lomi Lomi Massage! And then, I went to Hawaii University and ate lunch at the cafeteria. But I had a little bit trouble also; that was is a long story, so I can't say talk about that here. But I could solve it just before calling the police. My trip to Hawaii was so great! I'd love to go there soon again, and next time I'd like to play Surfing!!
Hawaii is a wonderful place. Sounds like you did a lot- I'm so glad you had fun! :)
A Trip to Hawaii
I went on a trip to Hawaii last week. I stayed at condo for 5 nights and had a lot of experiences.. Sailing, boogieboarding, paddleboarding, snorkeling, and a Lomi Lomi massage! And then, I also went to Hawaii University and ate lunch at the cafeteria.
But I had a little bit trouble also, but that was is a long story, so I can't won't say [talk] or [write] about that here. But I could solve it just before calling the police. (Did you solve the problem before you called the police? This is a little unclear.) My trip to Hawaii was so great! I'd love to go there soon again soon, and next time I'd like to play go surfing!!
A Trip to Hawaii
I went on a trip to Hawaii last week. I stayed in a condo for 5 nights, and had a lot of experience.tried a lot of new things. (You can say "and had lots of new experiences", but we use "experience" in English to refer to really big things. I'm living in China right now, and I would refer to that as an experience. Experiences have a big impact on your life). Sailing, Boogieboarding, Paddleboarding, Snorkeling, and I got a Lomi Lomi Massage! And then, I went to Hawaii University and ate lunch at the cafeteria.
But I had a little bit trouble also, that was a long story, so I can't say about that here. I also had a bit of trouble, but that was a long story, and I can't say much about that here. But I could solve it just before calling the police. My trip to Hawaii was so great! I'd love to go there soon again soon, and next time I'd like to play try surfing!!
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