A foggy beach day

A foggy day at the  beach day

This morning I got all my stuff and reached the beach in the very early?? morning. It looked like it was going to be sort of a cloudy day. No signs of sun at all! The humidity was crazy though. Once there, I sitted sat in my beach chair and kept reading this amazing book "A Short History of Tractors in Ukrainian" - a clever comedy I'm really enjoying too and I thoroughly recommend it! Well, so, I think it's it had been like 20 minutes when I looked up and saw nothing! A huge fog was covering all the beach. It was even difficult to see the water despite I was me being just a 3-4 meters in front of it. Even though this fog was so intense thick the hot heat and humidity was really high.
I thought how cool must it be swimming with this fog! And that's right. Kind of spooky though. And the funny thing was the water was so clear this morning too so you could see everything.
I was swimming on my back I kinda (aaargghh!!!!) moved away from the shore, the scenario was so beautiful until that...I had stopped when suddenly there was this huge horrible jellyfish just near to me! I was so close to being stung by the animal creature. I got back to the shore, swimming on my back too -because this way I swim faster haha- and decided one shouldn't swim in spooky waters anymore! Then I dried myself with my towel and kept on reading my book!

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Brilliant! Your entries are always so lively and your enthusiasm comes over so clearly so it is always great fun reading them. This was was no exception, it was such a funny scenario. Help!

I hope you don't mind my adding my bit to the very few excellent corrections or alternatives already offerred.

Cheers

A Foggy beach Day at the Beach

This morning I got had all my stuff gear and reached and headed out to the beach in the very early in the morning. It looked like it was going to be sort of a cloudy day. No signs of the sun at all! The humidity was crazy though [I prefer to use "... was very high"]. The moment I was there, Once there, I sitted sat on my beach chair and kept on reading this amazing book, "A Short History of Tractors in Ukraineian"; a clever comedy I'm really enjoying to which I enjoyed immensely and would thoroughly recommend it to anyone. Well, so, I think it's been like 20 min After twenty minutes or so, when I looked up and saw nothing! A a huge fog was covering enveloped all the entire beach! It was even difficult to see Visibility was so bad that I cannot see the water despite even though I was just three or four meters away. a 3-4 meters in front of it. Even though This fog was so intense the hot thick like pea soup and the humidity was really very high.

I thought how cool it must be to swimming with in this fog even though it looked And that's right. Kind of spooky though. And The funny thing It was amazing that was the water was so crystal clear this morning too so that you could can see everything in it.

I was swimming on my back I kinda move and began to drift away from the shore.  , the scenario The scene was so beautiful until that...I had stopped When suddenly, there was this huge horrible giant jellyfish floated next just near to me! I was so close to scared to be stung by it the animal. that I got swam back to the shore, swimming on my back too -because this way I can swim faster! haha- and I decided one shouldn't swim on that I am too frightened to swim in these spooky eerie [you had used spooky before, it is better to use another synonym] waters anymore! Then I dry dried myself with my the towel and kept continued reading my book!

Good story.

CORRECTIONS:   foggy beach day A foggy day at the Beach

This morning I got all my stuff and reached arrived at the beach in the very early morning. It looked like it was going to be sort of a cloudy day. No signs of sun at all! The humidity was crazy though. Once I got there, I sitted sat on my beach chair and kept reading read this amazing book ",A Short History of Tractors in Ukrainian," a clever comedy I'm really enjoying to and thoroughly recommend! Well, so, I think it's been like after 20 min when I looked up and saw nothing! A huge fog was covering the entire beach. It was even difficult to see the water despite I was just a being 3-4 meters in front of it. Even though this fog was so very intense, the hot heat and humidity was really (very) high.
I thought how cool it must be swimming to swim with in this fog! And that's I was right. It was kind of spooky though and the funny thing was that the water was so clear this morning too. so You could see everything.
I was swimming on my back I kinda kind of moved away from the shore. The scenario scenery was so beautiful until that...I had stopped to stop because, when , suddenly, there was this huge horrible jellyfish just near to me (could also use "close to me" or "right next to me"). I was so close to being stung by the animal. I got back to the shore, swimming on my back too -because this way I swim faster this way haha- and decided one shouldn't swim on in spooky waters anymore! Then I dry dried myself with my towel and kept reading my book!

Overall, really good English! I made a few corrections and suggestions on grammar to sound a little more natural. Hopefully it's helpful. Sounds like you had a really fun time at the beach. I'm jealous haha