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this is what i love----clear sky with fluffy clouds over my head, falling leaves over my bare feet, take a breath,lay down on the ground,i have someone to miss,nobody knows, nobody noticed yet, what a lovely day :)

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    organic Clear Weather use of the word "organic" here is not correct.  Natural is not correct either. Weather is not man-made yet.  Learn capitalization.

     

    This is what I love----clear sky skies 1 with fluffy clouds over my head; falling leaves over on my bare feet; , take taking a breath , and laying down on the ground.  I have someone to miss, but nobody knows; nobody no one noticed yet. What a lovely day! :)

     

    1. Or as Prons say, "A clear sky..."

    organic weather

    this is what i love----clear sky with fluffy clouds over my head, (You could also say "a clear sky," either way is correct.) falling leaves over my bare feet (I demmand photographic evidence of said barefeet ;) ), taking a breath,laying down on the ground,i have someone to miss,nobody knows, nobody noticed yet, what a lovely day :)

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