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about you best friend

I am love my friends . i like make a lot many friends. my best friend is beesho.
I usually talking with you . l often visiting in home. l sometimes go with you shopping and coffe shop. i am very very love you. l prefer spend time together .
She is friends since 6 years .she is friend since 6 years . i am not able life without you .

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    The first correction by Eng.Adeeb is mostly correct.  I just want to add a couple things.  

    You should write, "I always visit her in her home" or "I always visit her home"

    The word, 'cannot' in English is one word.  It is 'cannot'.    

    about you my best friend

    I am love my friends. I like to make a lot many of friends. My best friend is Beesho.
    I usually talking with to you her. l often visiting her in home. l sometimes go shopping with her and we sit at a coffee shop. i am very very love you  I love her very very much and l prefer like spending time together with her.
    She is has been my friends since for 6 years. she is friend since 6 years. I am can not able life live without you her.

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