hi. i am seeking friends & language exchange partners

Hi. I am seeking friends & language exchange partners.

　　Hi , I am a  21-year-old  female  living  in Beijing currently. I am seeking language exchange partners because as you see, I need [to] fix my grammar and speech.  I will teach you Chinese in exchange or try my best to improve your Chinese.
 
I like  to travel but can only travel in China currently. I like  cooking as well. We can talk about many interesting things.


I know that ordinary  Chinese speak English crudely sometimes, that's why I am seeking foreigners.  (Stan.low - I have rephrased your sentence, it may have altered the sense of what you were conveying. However I have found that many Chinese are extremely talented linguists so don't give up on finding a talented partner locally).

My english up to this point would hardly pass muster, it's so bad.  (Stan.low I like this expression ).

I look forward to your reply, please add me.

Thank you!

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