My first notebook entry in Nepali: Please help me guys. ::(

My first notebook entry in Nepali: Please help me guys. ::(

Ma nepali sikdai chu(I am learning Nepali). Ma nepali ma dherai kamjor chu. Please malai madat garana/'gardeunna/gardinuhosna, sathiharu(friends)/

Correct this note please, i know it made no sense) :(

My first notebook entry in Nepali: Please help me guys. ::(

Ma nepali sik chu. Ma nepali ma dherai kamjor cha. Please malai madat garna dosto.
Correct this note please, i know it made no sense) :(

My first notebook entry in Nepali: Please help me guys. ::(

Ma nepali sik chu. Ma nepali ma dherai kamjor cha chu. Please malai madat garna garnuhos.dosto.(sathiharu=dost)
Correct this note please, i know it made no sense) :(

you made very minor mistake.