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在坡特兰出差

我这周在坡特兰拍一些访谈的视频,看望几个人,还计划学言语的记录片。十一月我会去上海,会在中国再待几个月继续学习,拍摄。

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    坡特兰波特兰出差

    我这周在坡特兰波特兰拍一些访谈的视频,看望几个人,还计划(是计划会拍还是正在策划?)一部言语语言的记录片。十一月我会去上海,在中国再待几个月继续学习拍摄。

    在坡特兰出差

      我这周在坡特兰拍一些关于访谈的视频,看望几个人(朋友),还计划言的记录片。十一月我会去上海,会在中国那里(cause you said you will go to Shanghai, so to make it more logical, it's better just say "i will stay THERE for some months")再待几个月继续学习(“ctrl”+"\" we use this punctuation when listing a few things, for example, "I like banana, apple and grape.我喜欢香蕉、苹果和葡萄。")拍摄。

     

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    I  can see you have learnt Mandarin for some time and you can deal with most of the grammar and the use a correct word in the sentence. However, your title is "the business trip in 波特兰 " with half of the content is about another trip in China, so, I suggest you to write some interesting stories about your businesss trip there so as to make the writing focused:) If you got any confusion of my correction please contact me.

    "会在中国再待几个月继续学习,拍摄"这两个词这间不用“”隔开的!

    在坡特兰出差

    我这周在坡特兰拍一些访谈的视频,看望几个(看望几个朋友or拜访一些人)还计划(拍摄)言语(语言)的记录片。十一月我会去上海,会在中国再待几个月继续学习(和)拍摄。

    在坡特兰出差

    我这周要(will)在坡特兰拍一些访谈的视频,看望几个人,还计划学言语的记录片。十一月我会去上海,会在中国再待几个月继续学习拍摄。

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