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Hello, well I´m learning french right now , and my homework is sing a song, But I must to choose one country where speak in french, so to first I think is Canadá!! my fave country , well i know a few Canadian bands, like The Birthday Massacre, really cool, but no one in french. Someone can recommend a good band or singer Canadian please? specially around rock music, pop or even hip hop is all right :D

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    Hello, well I´m learning french right now , and my homework is sing a song, But I must to choose one country where speak in french, so to first I think is Canadá!! my fave country , well i know a few Canadian bands, like The Birthday Massacre, really cool, but no one in french. Someone can recommend a good band or singer Canadian please? specially around rock music, pop or even hip hop is all right :D


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    Hello, I´m learning french right now. My homework is "sing a song", but I must choose a country that speaks French. I think of Canada first because it's my favorite country.I also know a few Canadian bands, such as The Birthday Massacre. They are really cool, but no one is French. Can someone recommend a good Canadian band or singer,  please? Especially rock music, pop or even hip hop is all right :D


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    "Well" sounds okay, but the sentence sounds better without it. Too many commas are added here. Adding too many commas is bad. Adding quotations isn't neccessary, but is very helpful for readers. "But" shouldn't be capitalized here. I never saw Canada spelled as Canadá until I saw this. Is that the French way? "My" should be capitalized and "favorite" always sounds better than "fave" to me, but using "fave" is okay. "Someone can" should be "can someone" and a comma should be added before please. "in" should be changed to "is".  "Specially" should be "especially" for this sentence. "Around" shouldn't be in this sentence. I hope this helped. :D


     

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