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Salam alaikum! plz check what i made.

Recently I am learning words related to emotions. So I made some sentences.

1. i love when you smile.
أنا أحب عندما تبتسم

2. the man insulted here with a scandal.
الرجل شتمها مع جرسة

3. you complained about the food.
أنت شكيت من ال طعام

4. i hug him and kissed him.
أنا حضنته وقبلته


5. my friend has a good personality.
صديقي شخصية طيبة

about no.5, what do i use for "has"??

thanks! ^^

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    Salam alaikum! plz check what i made.

    Recently I am learning words related to emotions. So I made some sentences.

    1. i love when you smile.
    أنا أحب عندما تبتسم

    2. the man insulted here with a scandal.
    الرجل شتمها بفضيحة

    3. you complained about the food.
    أنت إشتكيت من الطعام

    4. i hug him and kissed him.
     حضنته و قبلته


    5. my friend has a good personality.
    لصديقي شخصية جيدة

    صدقي لديه شخصية جيدة

    صديقي يملك شخصية جيدة

    about no.5, what do i use for "has"??

    thanks! ^^

    وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله  :)
    Hi, Good Job! :)


    1. i love when you smile.
    أنا أحب عندما تبتسم

    You've missed a pronoun  the correct sentence is :-
    أنا أحبك عندما تبتسم
    If you want to sound more like a native speaker you should say :-
    أحبك عندما تبتسم
    or even better
    كم أحبك عندما تبتسم!
    Note that if you are talking to a girl you should say :-
    كم أحبكِ عندما تبتسمي !
    2. the man insulted here with a scandal.
    الرجل شتمها مع جرسة
    I didn't understand this sentence !! but I think that you are trying to say :-
    شُتم الرجل غيبةً
    3. you complained about the food.
    أنت شكيت من ال طعام
    There is no space between ال andطعام
    In Arabic when we want to say that someone have complained about the food we actually say
    أنت تَشَكَّيت من سوء الطعام
    The word in pink means "bad" and if I translate it to English it will be like :-
    you've compained about how bad the food was.
    4. i hug him and kissed him.
    أنا حضنته وقبلته
    Again if you wan to sound more like a native speaker just say :-
    حضنته وقبلته
    for girls >>>> حضتنها وقبلتها
    I'd say :-
    احتضنتها وقبلتها
    5. my friend has a good personality.
    صديقي شخصية طيبة
    I'd say :-
    صديق يمتلك شخصية رائعة

    Really good keep going

    جيد جداً واصل التقدم :)

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