6/10/2012 Tiễng việt
Yesterday I went to see a concert. The concert was really great! The concert had two music groups performing, Lynyrd Skynard and the Doobie Brothers. I really like watching concerts
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6/10/2012 Tiếng việt
Hôm qua, tôi đã đi xem hòa nhạc. Buổi hòa nhạc rất tuyệt! Có hai ban nhạc biểu diễn là Lynyrd Skynyrd & The Doobie Brothers. Tôi rẫt thích xem hòa nhạc.
Yesterday I went to see a concert. The concert was really great! The concert had two music groups performing, Lynyrd Skynard and the Doobie Brothers. I really like watching concerts
6/10/2012 Tiễng việt
Hôm qua tôi đã đi xem hòa nhạc! hòa nhạc rất tuyệt! Hòa nhạc co' hai ban nhạc biểu diễn, Lynyrd Skynyrd & The Doobie Brothers. Anh rất thích xem hòa nhạc.
Yesterday I went to see a concert. The concert was really great! The concert had two music groups performing, Lynyrd Skynard and the Doobie Brothers. I really like watching concerts
Your grammar is good! but you shouldn't say 2 personal pronouns in 1 paragraph. Use either "tôi" or "Anh" :))
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