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也许你觉得太慢,
也许你想不注意,
你要听说恋爱的汉语,
要听说我感觉。

你看见看我里面,
我最里边的想法。
我应该说什么?我做什么?
呆跟我。

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    Maybe you think I am [acting] too slow,也许你认为我太慢,
    you think of me as oblivious.你认为我不注意,
    You want to hear the words of love,你想听到爱的话语,
    want to hear my emotions?想知道我的感情,

    You see my inside,你看见我的内心,
    My inner-most thoughts我内心最深处的想法,
    What should I say? What should I do?我应该说什么?我应该做什么?
    Stay with me留在我身边。

     I think "留” is better ,because it has the meaning that you want her to stay with you. and the  emotional colouring is strong than "待",just my  opinion,hope it will be helpful!

    Maybe you think I am [acting] too slow,也许你觉得我反应迟钝,
    you think of me as oblivious.(也许)你觉得我不注意你。
    You want to hear the words of love,(也许)你想听(我说)爱你。
    want to hear my emotions?(也许你)想“听听”我在想什么?

    You see my inside,你(应该)看看我的内心,
    My inner-most thoughts(看看)我内心深处的想法。
    What should I say? What should I say?我应该说什么?我应该说什么?
    Stay with me待在我身边

     

     My little bit opinion:)

    第二次尝试

     

    要听说我感觉。 

    也许你觉得太慢,

    认为我不注意,

    恋爱的词语

    我感觉的吗

     

    你看见里面,

    我最里边的想法。

    我应该说什么?我做什么?

    呆跟我。

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