How could I write this better? (It’s best to not use “it” in English because people will not understand what you mean by using “it”)

Working in the touristic and restoration fields isn’t just a way to offer services and to get economic earnings, but it’s also a <s>moment</s> time where we should promote meetings, cultural events or <s>relaxing moments </s>relaxation. <s>Due this work</s> If these changes are made, we could <s>make the conditions to</s> build up significant experiences that everyone would keep <s>during the whole life</s> for the rest of their lives. People employed in these sectors are quite invisible; <s>presences that</s> they want to satisfy customers’ needs and make <s>the machine of the pleasures work</s> what they do worthwhile to the customer. Tourism is not only a <s>moment</s> time of pleasure, but also a moment of cultural enrichment. I’ve got a great passion for arts and culture, so I really like to work in the tourism industry, for example, as tourist guide, or in a museum, or perhaps as an Italian language assistant.