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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am I am a normal man Only in this world I have no brother or sister or mother or father or friend or friendly Family of dead 15-year - I'm sad for that Dear Why do I say to you I do not know I'm just sad man

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    No kidding,PLS.if you say that true ,i'm so sorry to hear that.but i hope you 'r kidding

     

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I am I am a normal man. I am alone in this world.   I have no brother or sister or mother or father or friend or friendly.  My family has been dead for 15-years.
    I'm sad because of that.
    Why am I telling you this? 
    I don't know. 

    I'm just  feeling sad.

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