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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I'm learning English because I am studying in a faculty of languages and translation. (You would follow a comma , not a full stop . with 'so') I have to (I think 'need to' would work better here, as it is a choice, not obligitory) improve my English to become a good translator, and I am also planning to complete my studies abroad. My native language is Arabic as I grew up in Egypt. I enjoy reading novels & medicine books.
Well done - easily understood. Couple of points below.
The word I is always capitalized.
Full stops come straight after the last word, with out a space, but are followed by a space.
I would also try not to start a sentance with a conjunction (a joining word), such as but, so, and and!
Hope that helps.
I'm learning English because i am studying a degree in languages and translation. I have to improve my English to become a good translator, and because i am planning to complete my study abroad. My native language is Arabic as i grew up in Egypt. I enjoy reading novels & medicine books.
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