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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because i am studying in a faculty of languages and translation . So i have to improve it to become a good translator .And also i am planning to complete my study abroad.
My native language is Arabic as i grew up in Egypt.
I enjoy reading novels & medicine books.

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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I'm learning English because I am studying in a faculty of languages and translation. (You would follow a comma , not a full stop . with 'so') I have to (I think 'need to' would work better here, as it is a choice, not obligitory) improve my English to become a good translator, and I am also planning to complete my studies abroad.
    My native language is Arabic as I grew up in Egypt.
    I enjoy reading novels & medicine books.

     

    Well done - easily understood. Couple of points below.

    The word I is always capitalized.

    Full stops come straight after the last word, with out a space, but are followed by a space.

    I would also try not to start a sentance with a conjunction (a joining word), such as but, so, and and!

     

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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I'm learning English because i am studying a degree in languages and translation. I have to improve my English to become a good translator, and because i am planning to complete my study abroad.
    My native language is Arabic as i grew up in Egypt.
    I enjoy reading novels & medicine books.

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