I am learning English because i don't want to be hesitated anymore in a group of people..
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I am learning English because I don't want to be hesitated hesistant anymore in a group of people..
It's the fourth day since my new semester has started and I have done, nothing. No study and I've not even bought books. Books!! Yes books because it's a semester system and we don't have plenty of time. Just another semester which I don't hope to just pass away. I really want to do something good, something special, something incredible this time. It's the time when I have to become less shy, or just not shy at all to get forward in life. One way to remove my hesitation, as suggested by one of my seniors is that I should talk to girls, particularly my classmates. So all the best to me wish me all the best, let's hope for the best to happen..
Notes: Mostly minor changes.
With this sentence
It's the fourth day since my new semester has started and I have done, nothing.
Normally I would take the last comma out making it
It's the fourth day since my new semester has started and I have done nothing.
A comma means pause at the point that it occurs in the text (Pause when reading it) and normally you would not put a comma there.
However this particular comma introduces a moment of drama into your text, you are highlighting what you have achieved - nothing.
So I have left the original sentence, it is more dramatic.
Good luck with your female classmates, treat them gently and remember they have many of the same fears and ambitions that drive you.
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