语法书: The Elements of Style

语法书: The Elements of Style

大家好！
如果你们想学习一流个的英文语法，我认为你们要看呢（it is best to use "呢”in the end of a sentence when you write in chinese.If you talk to others ,it is ok）个的书叫 《The Elements of Style》。我是大学到阅读到这本书。好了，我怕我讲的书太多了。每一天说说说。但对我自己有又好多用，和有时我看一下个书，然后在给这里写修改。但不重要！有好心学好的（using“的”in the end of a  sentence should be careful,because it is difficult to use it right.So it's better to cut it off）就好了。 加油！我自己写又不在乎一定要100%.

thank your recommendation.I am searching for a book to help me learn more about English gammar these days.But if the book The Elements of Style writing in English,it will be a bit difficult for me to understand it.

语法书: The Elements of Style

大家好！
如果你们想学习一流的个英文语法，我认为你们要看呢这个书，叫 The Elements of Style。我是大学阅读到这书。好了，我怕我讲的书太多了。每一天说说说，但我自己又用好多用，并且和有时我看一下个书，在给这里写修改。但不重要！好心学好的了。 加油！我自己写又不是 在100%准确（？）.

1.pay attention 2 usage of "个'，it seems that you mistake it for another character“的”

2.the order of the composition needs improving.