First notebook entry: Introducing myself
man maha hastam ,man kheily dost daram zaban farsi ro va mikham bishtar oun zaban ro baladam ,man ahle lobanan hastam,man ham 4 ta zaban ro baladam .
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
salam
man maha hastam ,man kheily dost daram zaban farsi ro va mikham bishtar oun zaban ro yad begiram ,man ahle lobanan hastam,man ham 4 ta zaban ro baladam.
سلام
من ماها هستم، من خیلی دوست دارم زبان فارسی را (رو) یاد بگیرم و میخوام بیشتر آن زبان را یاد بگیرم. من اهل لبنان هستم. من هم 4 تا زبان بلدم.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
salam
man mahan hastam ,man kheily dost daram zaban farsi ro va mikham bishtar oun zaban ro baladam ,man ahle lobanan hastam,man ham 4 ta zaban ro baladam .
Dear Maha it is better that you say in this way:
Salam,
Esme man Maha ast., alagheye ziyadi be zabane Farsi daram., va hamchenin alagheye Vaferi(Ziyadi) be yadgiriye bishtare in zaban daram. man ahle Lobnan hastam. va ghadr be sohbat kardan be 4 zabane zendeye donya hastam.
doostdare shoma,
Maha
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
salam
man maha hastam. man kheily dost daram zaban e farsi ro dost daram va mikham bishtar ba oun in zaban ro baladam yaad begiram. man ahle lobanan hastam. man ham va 4 ta zaban ro baladam.
Well done Maha!
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